Birdy Member
Posts : 20 Join date : 2010-05-19 Age : 75 Location : East Sussex
| Subject: THE PERFECT GARDEN Fri May 21, 2010 11:51 am | |
| Look into a garden, All neat and laid in rows. The weed says "Beg your pardon," When speaking to a rose.
Man's perfection blooming, Pruned and gently fed, The rose needs constant grooming, To addorn his flower bed.
One snip here and one snip there, There are certain rules to keep. The height, the colour and the size, Or follows troubled sleep.
The weeds arrive so naturally, Enjoy the rain and sun. The gardner hoes and pulls them out. Removes them every one.
The bed is how he wants it, The perecious roses torn, How can this man who tends them, Their fellow plant life scorn?
Strewn upon the dung heap, Before the autumn fire, A little bird comes down to rest, And sits upon a tyre.
Side by side a rosehip, And a tattered little weed, Lie in wait so patently. They had no time to plead.
The man approaches with a match, With which to light to fire. The bird with eager eyes does watch, Then with seeds flies high and higher.
The precious seeds tightly held, Between its tiny beak, The bird flies over seas and fields, To a distant mountain peak.
Golden rays of Autumn sun, Tiny drops of rain, The little bird lands softly, And plants the seeds again
There in nature's garden, They grow up side by side, No more "Beg your pardon," As friends they do abide.
Many years pass by them, They're happy as they grow. The bird revisits often, More tiny seeds to sow.
The gardener, now an aged man, His children grown and gone, Reads all about a garden, He'd like to look upon.
His strength did not forsake him, As slowly he moved on, To find this truly, wondrous thing, That others gazed upon.
Sun filtered down through luscious green, The tree stood proud and tall. Beneath his feet strange fowers grew, Amazed he gazed at all.
There he sood this aged man, Caressed by sweet perfume. All colours of the rainbow, His heart it beat in tune.
The singing birds and whispering leaves, The golden rays of sun. Flowers, oh so beautiful, At last he felt at one.
They found him in the morning, A weed held in his hand. A peaceful smile upon his face, He'd found the perfect land.
Do not belittle the weed, but regard its strength as it penetrates the concrete slab. It remains long after the hybrids have ceased to exist. Birdy Heywood 2001 | |
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Skye Assistant Administrator
Posts : 225 Join date : 2010-02-19 Location : Western Isles
| Subject: Re: THE PERFECT GARDEN Fri May 21, 2010 3:29 pm | |
| Absolutely beautiful Birdy, thank you so much for putting your wonderful work on our forum. I love the way this tells a story, are we too not like weeds ourselves sometimes? Cut back in our prime, but fight on in a struggle to bloom. Skye x | |
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Birdy Member
Posts : 20 Join date : 2010-05-19 Age : 75 Location : East Sussex
| Subject: Re: THE PERFECT GARDEN Sat May 22, 2010 5:18 am | |
| Thanks for reading it Skye. I was planning to make a film of it whilst studying for my HND in film making a couple of years ago and maybe I still will. The old man had perfection all around him from the beginning but he just didn't see it. it wasn't until he rediscovered it in the garden where all things are equal that he found it again. Weeds, tiny, delicate blades of grass, have such strength as they push their way through concrete, dry parched earth or old brick walls. Tis not the outer beauty or apparent strength that counts but the true driving force connected to the true source. Wow that just came out of me. Better get on with strimming the lawn, I will do it carefully so as not to harm little creatures. x Birdy | |
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Fagin Administrator
Posts : 156 Join date : 2010-02-18 Location : Isle Of Lewis
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Birdy Member
Posts : 20 Join date : 2010-05-19 Age : 75 Location : East Sussex
| Subject: Re: THE PERFECT GARDEN Sun May 23, 2010 10:17 am | |
| Thanks, the poem mean a lot to me as it came to me one morning and I couldn't stop writing until I had completed it. Then I cried. | |
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